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Good job once again. I like this more and more each time I read it. My only suggestion is that maybe it would be a good idea not to put ...

It's great. It really felt like I was there by the way you discribed it. I liked the way you told the chapter and did not see much wrong. My ...

Oh my gosh I loved it. Usually I don't read poems but since you asked I thought what the heck. And I'm glad you did. Wow! No crit. I can't ...

I really liked it, but I am too wondering what was going on inside the guys head as well. I did not see anything to crit about. Good job. Can't ...

I awoke the next morning feeling a slight breeze on my face. I stretched, sat up, and looked over at Jessie, who was standing by a window. He stood in ...

I really thought that part was funny too. I'll be posting agian soon.

Elizabeth released me from the hug she had given me, and I turned toward the man waiting for me, his tall form indistinct in the darkness. “Come,” he ordered, extending ...

I liked it. Very amusing and I can relate to the character. I didn't see any mistakes besides the ones that everyone else did. Can't wait to read more!

The rain had stopped by the time Jessie arrived, but the sky was still threatening. As soon as his carriage had appeared, I stepped out onto the balcony in my ...

I like it so far and can't wait to read more. Only problem I saw was: “My only wish,” she began after a silence, “my only wish is that you ...

Okay this has nothing to do with my story but is it just my comp or is the home page messed up. After that night, I never saw William Castallono ...

Late that same night, my parents had come into my room as I was settling in for the night. I knew it was coming, but what they did not know, ...

I guess they are okay except for the fact that mine is still pretty much without clothing...guess I need to start writing more often. LOL!

Okay I don't see how anyone can like sponge bob. I mean the stupid thing is gay with patrick. I don't mean to hurt anyone's feelings but I can't stand ...

I saw some of those but now all I want to do is get some candy and watch a movie.